Thread:AnonymousRose94/@comment-25397397-20141106233734/@comment-24781217-20150114021211

Well done! I have to say, I'm getting sick of Amy constantly being saved, but then again, that's a good thing, considering the way you want her to be portrayed. Only one complaint this time. Remember when I told you a while ago to beware breaking the fourth wall? I'm going to continue with that. Chris saying "I'm running out of ideas" strikes me as you making that statement. When he said that in Top Dog I also got that same feeling about the producers. So try to avoid that line if possible. Another thing was Chef saying Chris called him a "background character." The concept of Chris shoving Chef to the front for a change was good, it's just the line that wasn't right to me.