User blog comment:Geoff&Courtneyfan/Total Drama World Domination Ep 1: Dirty Things Done Dirt Cheap/@comment-4389268-20180324004246

Since this is your first chapter, I'll give you an A-. Grammar aside (which i dont really care), there isnt much problem though Duncan's kinda out of character, even for his hidden nice guy side. Everyone OC on the other hand are excellent.

PS: Try not to revisit countries/cities that had already been visited in TDWT and RR.