Thread:AnonymousRose94/@comment-25397397-20141106233734/@comment-24781217-20141130080945

It's good! You're getting better with applying the characters' personalities, now for something else: interactions. I do notice that this is all about the challenge, and another part of what makes this series so great is the character interactions. See if you can interweave interesting interactions into the challenge without working yourself too hard. Are there HTF and TD characters who would go well together as friends? Create lots of drama as enemies? Ignite season-spanning plots? You've got something great going on there at the beginning with Topher and Sierra; try to place things like that throughout the episodes.