User blog comment:Usitgz/Total Drama ON A TRAIN! Episode 3: Journey with the Pests/@comment-33083813-20180626163710/@comment-1152668-20180701011549

Thanks, Alpha! Glad that you liked it! I tried to make the characters make as sensical decisions as possible while still moving the plot forward, making occasional jokes, and keeping their cartoony quirks. I'm relieved to know that I balanced it decently. Also good to know that I didn't make Ryan too much of a red herring.