User blog comment:Attackin/a thousand ways to get slashed/@comment-4091721-20180213201026

Okay, better eipsode than last time, and I see you fixed the problem that I was having with the confessionals last time, There's just a few things I wanna point  out. First, lines like this: "Wolf: Roar!" are unnecessary, You could've just did something like this: Suddenly out of nowhere a giant white wolf appears. it made a giant, blood curdling roar. The Flamingos ran away in terror. Anyways, that's just what I would do it. Also, random appearance by Veronica was random. I can overlook some your spelling issues but I do agree with Wreaker on the grammar, I know you said grammar is a problem, but you could do better. Overall, good episode. 8/10