Thread:Stryzzar/@comment-1037137-20150313055759/@comment-24152851-20150323022249

Oh geez, that illness put you out of commission for a week. Glad you're feeling better now. What did you come down with, a flu or something?

It's a show called Pixel Pinkie. It's the kind of show you can tell is made only to take up a timeslot, and was never expected to acquire any sort of fanbase. I think I've seen it twice because I really had nothing better to do at that time. Thankfully it hasn't aired in ages.

True, TTG's biggest crime is riding the success of the previous series while having nothing to credit itself. There's always going to be dumb shows like that, CN is flooded with them at the moment, but why tarnish an otherwise unrelated series with that crap as well. And even if you had to make it silly, what's the point in taking shots at the original series?

Yeah, but one difference between TTG and Fresh is one show is meant to be taken seriously, but they were still too ignorant and insensitive as to what they were doing. While the other is so stupid nothing should be taken for face value. I mean you wouldn't really care if a show like South Park or made those kinds of implications, because it's meant to be stupid and offensive. But yeah, I still don't forgive TTG for doing that, I just meant Mr. Enter took the analysis to 3 times the level of most haters.

I also saw his analysis of Waffles, which I 100% agree with everything he said there. How they repeated the same stupid word once every 3 seconds, where even the show itself realizes it isn't funny. Mr. Enter was rooting for the villain in that episode, which was kind of fun to watch.

To the inquiry. Yeah sure no problem. Fully understand what you mean. Hmm, then in that case maybe split it into 2 paragraphs from that "Aside from the fact that..." line.

Two more thing that slipped by me last time:

In paragraph two, I think the line: "...but it also had quite a few people who were genuinely invested in seeing this resolved this time." can be trimmed down a bit. It's just a bit of a mouthful. I would go something like: "...but there were a fair share of viewers genuinely invested in it being resolved this time."

Also in paragraph four. This is sentence "Which is another fair point I'd like to bring up, it is true that more people enjoyed Scott in this season on a whole, and the portrayals of Gwen and Courtney have always been an issue for many, and redemption has been something a considerable number of people had been desiring to see from both, which made this plot that much more of an important point for many who were' watching." is a bit overly long. I think you can split it at the "an issue for many, and redemption" bit. So that you start a new sentence with "Redemption has been something considerable to many..."

Other than that, everything else is pretty good.