User blog comment:ArtDraw12/TDAS eliminations - My Way/@comment-43491218-20190813145221/@comment-11883116-20190813174016

I only mention that she sat on her, so I can see why you could think so, but it seems rather obvious she didn't do this on purpose, especially since it's an event from the canon. Besides, it was just one of many mistakes made by contestants. They are often voted out for making mistakes. See Ezekiel in Walk Like An Egyptian - Part 2 for example. He intended to get rid of the crocodiles, not for the stick to get lost. But what matters is that the stick got lost, so the others blamed him. Sierra didn't wait for Courtney to come out, which was a pretty dumb mistake if I were to be honest (especially since Courtney isn't invisible or something), a mistake worthy of being eliminated. I wouldn't blame Courtney myself because it's not like Sierra is blind, and even then she should've checked whether the carriage is empty first.

Well, he's seen how Duncan treats nerdy guys like him. And Duncan was the only choice for Cameron's trio to vote for, as Brick is their friend as well. And it's not like Duncan got eliminated in that episode, he got eliminated in a different one for being a threat. That's a good reason, I believe.

Oh yeah, how insensitive I am for a more realistic approach in my version where instead of getting rid of his MPD with a push of unrealistic button, Mike is instead sent for therapy, the realsitic way to treat mental problems. Someone better arrest me. And nope, I didn't kill Mike at all. The note section of the finale mentions what happened to Mike for the duration of that episode. If you're interested in some behind-the-scenes plot, Mike's MPD would never be fully cured in this version, but usually he'd manage to keep it under control thanks to constant visits to a therapist and a support from his girlfriend, friends, and family.

At least this couple is competitive, so I believe it's an improvement over a sweetheart Mike vs. Zoey. Not as great as Alejandro vs. Heather, but there would still be more tension, etc than in canon. They are the second or maybe third (cuz Duncney) most competitive couple, after all. Also, Mike spent over half of the season in his brain, while Mal wasn't really that worthy antagonist or contestant, which is why I eliminated him in one of the last episodes - so he wouldn't overstay his welcome, but so that he'd have enough time as the main antagonist of the season.

I am glad that those are the only issues you've had with this version. From the first sentence I expected much worse. A professional writer doesn't write fanfictions of already existing series, so I assume you still allow me to pursue this career if I'd like to? Meanwhile, I'd like you to reflect on the writing style of your reviews. You could have listed your points in a nicer way. Overlooking some details (Duncan's elimination episode) and some prejudice against therapists also didn't work well for your comment. But other than that, thanks for the feedback :)