User blog comment:Poopydog999/My fanmade series/@comment-27060311-20160620045756

I was not going to review this not even watch this at first, I even ignored this for a while but my curiosity finally decided to see your series… I should kill my curiosity after this. So anyway there is a review of everything that you already posted : 

1 : Congrats, that’s HOW you don’t do a start of total drama series, no information, bunch of characters out of nowhere, no interactions at all and the way you have done this is so amateur  and bad that surprises me (0/10) 

2 : The only good things of this episode is the fact that you managed to get Chris’s essence and that actually you had the dignity to do some new animations when they are jumping, aside that ANOTHER time random characters out of nowhere, no proper introduction of these characters, challenge was revamped and a little boring specially with the fact that only 3 persons are competing out of 9 and deciding a team fate which at first I think would make the elimination predictable but no you do a elimination out of NOWHERE and for no good reason or showing the certain aspect of the character that made him eliminated(NOT SAYING THAT A CHARCTER IS BOSSY DOESN’T MEAN HE NEED TO BE ELIMINATED, ITS JUST A POOR EXCUSE) and by the way did you asked the permission to use the character because looking by the way it’s done I know you didn’t make it for sure. Ps: There is a very confuse text at the start of the episode(third thing that Chris said to be more specific). 0/10 

3: Random plots out of nowhere again, LOVE ONES NICE…..the challenge again seems very unoriginal and again involve ONLY few characters from each team while others do nothing… 

Look team challenges are normally created for the use OF THE ENTIRE TEAM or the team gets in max 1 or 2 members removed to make it fair, here well you have no reason to remove characters but you removed… 1/10 

<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">Positive side : Boys Interaction and James sabotage the other team. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">4 : Another bad episode, Confessionals you at least tried though the plot also was at least OK if it wasn’t rushed...now I noticed another thing in your series,  the plots are sooooo RUSHED 2/10 <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">5: OH LOOK ANOTHER RUSHED EPISODE, I don’t like anything Rushed I really don’t, the challenge again is something already done before in the series not once…BUT TWICE. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">The character interactions are again poorly handled, also the fact that you used scratch to do this is something sad, you may had a chance to do a good series but I think the harm is already done by now(since its already episode 12 and I still need to do more) and oh look a team swap…ugh… 2/10 <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">6 : …0/10 I don’t have words to describe what, I felt like I was watching a 5 year old kid play when they are supposed to be adolescents or even close to adulthood, this thing was a MESS. Ugh and this is just half of it… <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">7 : That challenge is just OK, another time terrible animation and interactions, well at least you get them in swimsuits so props for that. Oh and congrats this is the first chapter that passed my grade of 2 out of 10, probably last one to do this miracle. 3/10

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">8 : So let me guess, David hates James because he took the bed that he wanted…NOT BECAUSE JAMES TRIED TO DROWN HIM, PRIME MISTAKE OF ANY WRITER, CONTINUATION,  REALLY HOW YOU LET A DETAIL LIKE THAT PASS, ALSO THE TWIST IS GENERIC AS HELL, ALREADY DONE 2 OR 3 TIMES DURING THE SERIES AND THE TOP OF ALL .. wait the plot wasn’t rushed no, the plot wasn’t but the episode again was…look you can’t do anything related to reality shows in one minute and five seconds, this is called laziness, the max you can use that time is for a summary and even then it wouldn’t be a nice one the way you did it. –1/10 <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">9 : Oh look rushed plot new characters and we only get the chance of knowing one of the characters(nice….), the challenge is just… UGH(I can’t even describe)…and the last of all, well you made a similar Duncan and Courtney plot however its bland since it’s a lazy animation… 1/10 <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">10 : Another stupid twist that caused AN INCREDIBLE STUPID ELIMINATION, UGH WHY JUST WHY….So now someone can be disqualified by stealing someone’s glasses(No one had a proof that he did though) and ALSO plotholes since sabotaging and nearly kill people get you far in the game but steal is BOO HOO, if he was eliminated by AT LEAST HIS TEAM IT WOULD PASS, BUT BY CHRIS? Why I even try to review that is incredible…another bad episode, more generic interactions, another bad episode -1/10 <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">11 : Bland, boring and bad. Also congrats for ruining a aftermath (0/10) next… AND ONE SECOND DID A CHARACTER SAID SHE WAS COMING BACK?! <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">12 :  So I know my review of 11 didn’t end, but don’t worry I will finish it here, last episode one character said she would come back for some reason and GUESS WHAT SHE COMES BACK, FOR NO GOOD REASON at ALL aside revenge(Ok maybe Chris would do it one day but still a very bad reason to return a contestant to the game), she just comes back and no relevance at ALL( puff), you know TDI might had two returning contestants but at least it wasn’t bad LIKE THAT and in other seasons they at least show a reason to them return(THE ONLY EXCEPTION BEING AMY), ALSO ANOTHER repeated challenge for a episode nice…very nice, this episode was embarrassing in all matters and the fact that a team that already won the challenge, loses because someone shot other person accidentally WAS HORRIBLE, 1000 X HORRIBLE. Unfair elimination, bland interactions, Stupid plot decision and the top of all another attack of YOUR INCREDIBLE LAZINESS AND NO THERE IS NO WAY, ANY WAY THAT BLAKE’S ELIMINATION(I don’t care about him) WAS SOMETHING FAIR OR EVEN DECENT TO SAY THE LEAST IT WAS AWFUL. There is only thing good in this episode James’s Confessional AND THAT IS ALL. -100/10 <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">Final verdict from these twelve chapters: Worse than TDAS <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">Don’t get me wrong but you managed to get in a level WORSE than TDAS, because of a many reasons and I will list it here and I’m not even counting grammar problems because everybody can make a mistake in grammar it happens, its normal to anyone, heck even I don’t have a good grammar, so now for the points : <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">1- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">NEVER DO A SERIES IN SCRATCH OR EVEN THAT EACH CHAPTER IS 1 MINUTE AND 5 SECONDS THAT IS AWFUL, TRY TO DO IT ON DEVIANTART,FANFICTION.NET OR EVEN IF YOU ARE GOING FOR SOMETHING ANIMATED ANYWHERE EXCEPT SCRATCH. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">2- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">MAKES THE CHARACTER AT LEAST INTELIGENT, DAVID’S REASONING FOR NOT LIKING JAMES NEARLY MADE ME PUKE… <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">3- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">CREATE GOOD PLOTS OR EVEN CHALLENGES, DON’T BE LAZY OR DON’T TRY TO DO NEW THINGS THAT WERE NOT USED, EVEN IF IT WAS INSPIRED IF IT’S AT LEAST ORIGINAL, IT’S ALREADY SOMETHING <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">4- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">MAKE BETTER CHARACTERS INTERACTIONS, THESE INTERACTIONS WERE AWFUL. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">5- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">DON’T TRY TO SAVE CHARACTER BECAUSE PLOT CONVINIENCE AND THINGS LIKE THAT NOT ONLY IT’S A HORRIBLE DECISION BUT ALSO ITS LAZY. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">6- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">EXPLAIN THE THINGS FOR THE PEOPLE, THERE IS TIMES WHERE YOU GAVE 0 INFORMATION OF A CHARACTER AND EVEN CHALLENGES(BLAKE'S CASE SPECIFICALLY, YOU CAN'T INTRODUCE A CHARACTER AND MAKE HIM SAYS ZERO THINGS IN HIS FIRST EPISODE) <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">7- <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;font-family:"TimesNewRoman",serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">       <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">DO NOT MAKE A INTRO LIKE THAT, MAKE A DEBUT OF ALL THE CHARACTERS AND HOW THEY ACT, ALSO USE YOUR OWN CHARACTERS(COF COF ANTHONY IS NOT YOURS AND I’M CERTAIN ABOUT THAT) <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm0cm0.0001pt18pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">And that’s it, the caps on the list is just a alert and not a scream with the only point being criticize your series and  YOU PROBABLY SHOULD FOLLOW ANY CRITIC THAT YOU RECEIVE IF YOU EVER WANT TO DO A FANFICTION AGAIN OR TO ANYONE TAKE YOU SERIOUS. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">Hopefully you will read this and maybe make some things better or not... <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">