User blog comment:TheZobe/TDC PAGE 1!/@comment-2043264-20100627010431

Hey Zobe, I have a suggestion. I enjoy drawing and making artwork too, so I know a little bit about this. Don't get me wrong, your work is amazing! But there's one problem:

You should try to make the tables they're sitting at a little darker, or make the background a little lighter or darker. It's hard for me to tell that they're sitting at tables, and that's probably why I thought Jordan was wearing earrings at first!