Thread:AnonymousRose94/@comment-25397397-20141106233734/@comment-24781217-20141226051507

Okay, done! Great job again!!! I really liked how you combined episodes 10 and 11. That's always fun. Although, it wasn't clear how Izzy, Trent, Sam, and the others turned into zombies (I understood the bites, but what exactly happened?). Did they get sick like in Hurl?

Another thing I'm beginning to notice. There isn't a lot of Happy Tree Friends in here. The characters barely appear and I still know little to nothing about them. What is their purpose? The crossover is what makes this fic so unique, but the HTF characters are given so little time that I sometimes forget this is a crossover. Do you think in the future it would be possible to give them more moments and interactions with the TD characters? And little things that show off their personality? It would really help the reader!

You're doing really well! And I appreciate you taking my advice to heart! Keep it up!