Thread:Bonkilemonster/@comment-25126603-20150407051444/@comment-24394066-20150503042039

Hey, Ariel! I've heard the auditions you've sent me. They're AWESOME!!! I defintly (I spelled it wrong -.-) think your pitch of voice is perfect, for both characters, and you should not change that. Your audition was really great, BUT, something you might want to change in both auditions is your speed. Yes, you're right, Celia is supposed to talk slowly, but I do want to suggest for you to talk faster in Celia's audition. In Iris' audition, I might suggest talking faster too, espcially in the part when she says her own quallities, in that part she is talking kinda of fast, showing us that she isn't noticing what is going on behind her. So, my only suggestion in to talk faster. I hope you're not offended by this in any way, cause this is just for you to make a better audition (keep in mind that your first ones were AMAZING!). Take you're time and send another auditions. If you wouldn't like to do so I'll accept that, So, not worries! :D

Good luck! :D