Thread:Stryzzar/@comment-1037137-20150201074641/@comment-24152851-20150215091153

Well for the line: "A strong portion of the fandom would like to be able to enjoy their favorite characters, but over time that has become very difficult for many fans as they have not taken well to the rather negative development and frequent humiliation of the characters; when it comes to being able to enjoy them it's not just about humiliaton, there's more to it than that" The stuff about enjoying humiliation is sort of mentioned twice, and can be summed up a bit in the second half of the sentence. Then it's mentioned again in the final line: "The humiliation aspect is especially alarming in how it has come to affect the fandom's enjoyment of all these characters"

I think that can be mashed together.