Thread:AnonymousRose94/@comment-25397397-20141106233734/@comment-24781217-20141216040708

Sherman, baby, please don't pressure me, okay? As I said before, I've always got your updates on mind, so there's no reason to be worried.

Five, I think, is your best so far. The characterizations are well-done and I like the cross-cast interactions. Six I don't have much to say about. I've never been that fond of the Aftermaths, but you know, for a moment you had me thinking it was going to be a "murder" mystery. That would be a really cool idea, interrupting the regular Aftermath for a mystery of sorts. Just something to think about.

Also, I wanted to ask if maybe you could finish the chapters in groups before asking me for feedback? You've still got a lot of cast members remaining, and it would make it a lot easier to do a few at once, say three, instead of asking twenty more times, you know?