User blog comment:TheScottBird/A Better All-Stars/@comment-24220314-20131206022244

Its good. There are a few problems with it.

Mal taking over Mike forever is waaaaayyyyyy too dark. It's emotional but think that type of scene would be out of place in a show like TD.

The Mal thing is paced wery well in the first 4 episodes, but theres a difference between creating mystery and suspence and creating delay. The shadows and mystery are good but i think the fifth episode is where mal should be seen, but just for a quick bit, then the later episodes should increase the amount he's seen so the pacing is a bit better.

I don't see Ezekiel fitting in that well. It's kind of like finding a beetle in a jar of mayonaise. "What is this beetle doing here? It doesn't belong in here. There's no point to it being here."

Mr. Coconut winning is kind of a pisser. Especially since it showed up in one episode and won the whole thing. It like the show crowning the winner in the first episode and the next 12 are just the campers faffing about.

It's good though. Just needs some tweaking.