User blog comment:WreakerOfClash/(REWRITE) Total Drama Super Slamdown: Episode 6 - The Good, the Bad, and the Richard/@comment-4389268-20171014151429/@comment-4389268-20171014152050

This change a lot since it adds Lorelei as a potential sec antagonist. And this makes the "Everyone and Ken" conflict rises much earlier instead of later and his attempt to make friends hard right from the beginning and maybe his elimination. Then again it doesnt really bother with me. Just want to see how far both my OC can reach. Anyway, 3.5/5.

BTW, its ironic that you make Abbey claustrophobic when I imagine her design being a brunette Gwen wearing Sherlock Holmes' outfit