Thread:AnonymousRose94/@comment-25397397-20141106233734/@comment-24781217-20141209062445

They're both good! My advice with this two, which mostly has to do with my own preference, so don't feel forced to follow, has to do with the confessional. I don't like the confessional very much because I feel it stalls the story. That being said, it should be used primarily when something important is being said or you're trying to pull off a joke. In episode three you did good with that, but in four you had Gwen say something like, "That was close!" That kind of thing puts an unnecessary stop in the story. :)