Thread:Stryzzar/@comment-1037137-20150201074641/@comment-24152851-20150212072539

Okay thanks for understanding.

About the final paragraph. How'd I'd go about doing it is, rather than using phrases like "we all want..." or similar thing, I would try to go for something less demanding like "I think it'd be best..." or "a fair share of the fandom holds this view..." something like that. Just not being too aggressive.

Also I know the whole point of the thread is to give means of improvement, but "we do not solely mean their constant humiliation at every single given opportunity" sounds really accusing. Try to give it a more neutral tone like "this and this happened ... which many of us didn't enjoy" or "... were not happy with", something along those lines.

And finally that "If the impression is that the humiliation aspect is all that matters", feels like it's going into that "you're trying to intentionally be bad" mentality. Whether or not that's true, stuff like that should be avoided, as it's directly inferring the writers are not suited to their job.

That's the suggestions I've got for now.