Thread:Masta Shake1/@comment-33083813-20171111221757/@comment-28967746-20171117025010

Masta Shake1 wrote: Attackin wrote:

Masta Shake1 wrote: I really enjoy your season, albeit some episodes, which as Attackin said were ok. I myself hate "The Drama Hunter​" from my own season.

Yep, I gots a discord. I'm known as ​Fry #4841 I thought the episode was actually pretty good, probably because Eli was important I find it inferior. I dislike the fact of a paintball challenge, or at least how I executed it. It was a simple go to point A to B. I don't like that scene with Eli and Kylie, as I feel I didn't do a good enough job to really dive into Kylie's character in that scene, and it just feels forced. (I keep a tab open on the OCs page as to study the characters as I write as to not make anything OOC) I voted off Madeline, a bold move in my opinion, but I am trying to take away characters that I have no plot with. I want to be interesting with my season, and I do not want to keep bland characters around longer than they need to be. The episode to me felt, meh. I did a lacking job of dialogue, too. But hey, it's just how I find it.

Good things, though? It maybe tells us that Eli isn't all lazy. It has a Sarah / Jessica conflict, and we can start to see something different about Sarah. Also Jono is becoming a force to be reckoned with, whether he realizes or not, or the others realize. Yeah, I could see Jono returning only to be an early out. Also, you executed Logan/Sienna's friendship very well.