User blog comment:Fletcher.wright2/Total Drama Generation Mix: TDI Not So Happy Campers Part 2/@comment-39251217-20191221112809/@comment-35606925-20191221235543

I like it, though it's a lot easier to comment when there's an elimination to as it helps me see more where the story is going.

I would also say this might not be the site for it exactly. If you do some gramical touch ups, I would say put it on Fanfiction.net

You'll have a bigger audience for this type of thing.