User blog comment:KarpToEndAllKarps/Total Drama: Misfit Mayhem Episode 1/@comment-30933826-20170826235650

Very good. Could be longer to have some more characters and interactions, but a good start.

I'd also recommend adding in more line spacing to make it easier to read. For instance...

"What is the airspeed velocity of an unladen swallow?" Gramptus St. Bigmomt asked.

"That depends. Is it an African or a European swallow?" Toot Toot replied.

"It's actually Australian," Gramptus explained.

And so forth.