User blog comment:AlphaBeta25/Total Drama Super Slamdown Episode 20: Gravity Cliff/@comment-4389268-20180302012334/@comment-4389268-20180302023855

I dont hate Jim, he's around 8th. Look,  Sorry i';m harsh but its just because he escape too many times. No other villains or heroes in the actual show have that much luck. If this is an actual show, FireEater, ThomasVeggieDramaFan and a few others are going to have one long line of insults. I hate invincible heroes just as much as invincible villains meaning if you did the same to any of my characters, i'll dislike it as well.

I already said few weeks ago, i dont care who is in the finale, i just want to see how you show works and how you use the players. Use them well, give them character or a good episode focus on them, i'll give you an A Just because you like one character, doesnt mean you have to focus entirely on him only. That's how i view things here, both fanfic and actual thing.

Please understand, you need to know your flaws. The others are being nice giving you high grades but i need to play fair if you want to create a better story. And since i'm not a good critic, i still give you a B, which is 60-70%. The same goes for the other OC writers. Depend how they write their OCs, i'll give them either a B or an A. Anything lower means its really bad.

And also, do not get piss off. A good writer takes critism well. I'm not trying to be your enemy, I'.m trying to make you better.