User blog comment:ArtDraw12/TD eliminations - My Season/@comment-5231983-20160309175757

The thing about the episode: When you bring it down to it's bare bones, the challenge was lackluster and the plot dry. However, when you see it in it's entire body, you can really see the way that you, the author, and the characters helped the challenge and situations really work. It ends up being more than the sum of it's parts, a very interesting episode overall.

'' and so says Lindsay in her confessional about Tyler's butt. ''

Anyone and everyone would enjoy that view.

'' The jealousy motivates her to start and try to catch up to them. ''

Beth's obsession is kinda weird. It does feel like it's leading somewhere, but right now she's acting like she has a crush on Lindsay. Or Tyler. I wouldn't blame her for either one.

He however becomes so bored that he switches the TV channel to watch his favourite soap opera instead.

Classic Chef.

'' He involuntarily jumps to the direction of the edge of the roof, loses his balance, and falls down. Although the matresses broke the fall a bit, the ambulance arrives and Trent has to be taken to the hospital, as his injuries are too severe. ''

Ah, a throwback to Trent's chain of injuries <3 gotta love TDI

I also love the Brick and DJ alliance. It's definitely going places, and it can easily forge a great friendship between these two lovable characters. Good idea.

'' Anne Maria and Dakota hypocritically criticize each other for contributing to their team's potential loss. ''

I don't know why but I found this really funny. I bet if it were in the real show it'd be really funny.

Overall rating: A-, because you took an average challenge and plot and made it great. Keep up the good work! Also you referenced TDI by injuring Trent.