User blog comment:Attackin/Total drama champions ep: 8 Mark takes the dive/@comment-4091721-20180119192031

I'm bummed that Jessica is gone now, but at least she got some developement on her way out. I think I'll give her a cameo in my season. Anyways, I do think you need to work on your confessionals, at first I thought the characters were saying "static", but I went back and re-read. I'm not sure about putting some of the lines right next to each other. Overall, 4/5.