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You should at least try. That's the only way to improve. ;)

Hm, I doubt Brick would be so dumb to be manipulated by Max. By Jo, maybe. By Max? Nah.

BTW, since you like this type of fan fictions, I recommend you my fictional next season of TD. Here's the main page. So far I'm stuck at ninth episode and some of them aren't on pages yet (they're on blog instead). You should find all of them thanks to my and my season's navigations.

I also recommend you my My Way series aka my orders of eliminations of actual seasons. Details are on the blog, but you'll once again find each link on my navigation template.